since i read the poem.
I reconstruct from scratch the poem as follows:
I love you without knowing when, why & how
I love you so deep
So deep that when you breath, I feel yr breath
So deep when you close your eyes, I fell asleep
The real poem fr http://www.richardsweeting.org/2005/06/patch-adams-poem.html
is a follows:
I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way
than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.
Not too bad huh?
Looks like i am a romantic person after all, :)
1 comment:
That's such a lovely poem!
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