Sunday, July 20, 2008

Distortion of information

There is a poem from patch adam that i struggled to remember. It have been years
since i read the poem.

I reconstruct from scratch the poem as follows:

I love you without knowing when, why & how
I love you so deep
So deep that when you breath, I feel yr breath
So deep when you close your eyes, I fell asleep


The real poem fr http://www.richardsweeting.org/2005/06/patch-adams-poem.html
is a follows:

I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way

than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.


Not too bad huh?

Looks like i am a romantic person after all, :)

1 comment:

Unknown said...

That's such a lovely poem!